Homework 2
My cat died.
A few weeks ago, I lost the cat that I love. The name is Kapook. she had big eyes, short tail and she was a really good cat. One day, when I came back from the university, my mother told me that the cat was dying by a poisonous snake. After I heard that, I felt a great regret at the loss of my cat and tears started to pour out like a waterfall. I can't accept with the death of my cat so I was alone and feeling weepy all time. Even when not thinking of him, I was so sad. I thought when she was sleeping on my knee and I thought of all the good time we had together. She was adorable, playful and above all he was my best friend. From that day on, I will never forget him and it still brings a tear to my eye when I think of him. Finally, I have to learned to accept the up and down of life.
RIP Kapook
I'm so sorry about the death of your cat. Your story is very sad. The whole contents are good. But one thing that I think it is not interesting for me is your topic, I think that you can use the word or sentence better than this. I give you about 8.3/10.
ตอบลบThe story is very sad. I will give you 9 point.
ตอบลบI'm sorry about the incident.It is a great cat for you.I give you 9.
ตอบลบFor this story, I think it's well-organized, but I'm not sure about your cat's gender because at the beginning you use "She", but in some sentences you use "him", and the grammar is still not exactly correct, so I'll give you 8/10.
ตอบลบI would like to express my sympathy for your cat's death. For your story it made me confused as to what gender you are a cat. Sometimes you use words instead of she, sometimes you use words instead of him. You should check it again. I give you 7.5 point
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