Teen mom
There are many reasons why I think teenage pregnancy is a serious social problem. First, Teenage pregnancy resulted in the abortion issue, a problem child and tramp child. Some teenagers decided to terminate the pregnancy, abortion by hope when not pregnant, then will be able to come back to life and the study as usual. In fact, abortion is wrong the moral law, and the values of society, and, most importantly, great impact on health.
Second, Infect with sexually transmitted disease. Sexual intercourse can cause infections are sexually transmitted. Especially, AIDS is a disease that going around these days and making many a social problems. This disease cannot be cured completely and no vaccine for prevention of this disease. AIDS is causing health problems and social problems ensue. It also destroys the future.
Finally, The most teens of the pregnancies are studying in a school. When they pregnant, they can't be study, then it make their leave of the school. This means they have not the future of education. Some of them do not dare tell my parent, so they decided to go away from home to living by themselves. It has a many problem when a baby is born, especially the economic problems and social problems.
In conclusion, teenage pregnancy is a serious social problem and it's hard to solve a problem. People need to realize this problem and take care your children to the good way.
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There are also some mistakes in Grammar. So I give you 9/10 points.
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