This is a picture of Grandma's house. It’s
located in Pan District, Chiang rai. Grandma's house is a very beautiful place
for me. There was surrounded by nature and there have the beautiful garden beside a field. I will go to Grandma's house on my
vacation time and I like sitting on a bench in the yard because there is the peace of me. When I went to the garden in the yard, I saw a
scarecrow in the middle of the field and when I look up the sky I saw a bird
rides on the wind. I touch dew on the leaves of the grass. I also saw a buffalo
walk along the ridges between rice paddies. Furthermore, I smelt the fresh air,
and heard the sound of the breeze was stirring the leaves. It make I always felt
relax and comfortable.
Many of my best memories are the times that I
had by the Grandma's housed. I love there and Someday I will go back again one day.
You story is ok. I will give you 8/10.
ตอบลบThis picture is beautiful. I will give you 8.5 point.
ตอบลบIt's very warm place that I believe you love it so much. For the story, it's interesting and easy to understand, but it's not clear for me about the grammar. I'll give you 8.5/10
ตอบลบIt is a very cute image. Do you draw yourself? Your story is very interesting. I will give you 8.5 point.
ตอบลบI like your story It's easy to understand. And well organized.
ตอบลบI give you 8.5 points.
And if you go back to your grandmother's house, can I go there too?