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Hong Kong Disneyland
If you are looking for a fun place to relax during the vacation, and free yourself from the stress of work, I suggest Hong Kong Disneyland. Hong Kong Disneyland is a theme park located on reclaimed land in Penny's Bay, Lantau Island. Hong Kong Disneyland is surrounded by a fancy building. More and more people go there because there have a many show it is a fun and entertaining show for people of all ages.
At Hong Kong Disneyland, there are six: Tomorrowland, Fantasyland, Adventureland, Grizzly Gulch, Mystic Point and Toy Story Land. There is something so magical about seeing Sleeping Beauty’s Castle, watching a parade or going on the It’s A Small World attraction. It’s cheesy but it’s so well done that it can be impossible to not fall under its charm.
However, Disneyland is known as the happiest place on earth. If you are looking for the theme park during the vacation, Hongkong Disneyland might be a good choosen option.
Wow! It's a beautiful place. I like there. Overall is not bad but some points is not correct. I give you 9/10.
ตอบลบThis place is beautiful. I will give you 9 points.
ตอบลบThis story is interesting. But, I think it has some mistakes about grammar that you should rectify them, such as, in paragraph 1 line 5-6, "there have a many show", it should be "there have many shows" So, I'll give you 8/10
ตอบลบIt is a very exciting place. It's an interesting story. I like six places in there.I give you 9.
ตอบลบDisneyland is my dream place. I read your story made me want to go. You can add more details to be presented to this place. I give you 9 points.
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