Chinese New Year's day
Chinese New Year's day is the most important of the holidays for the Chinese, which is celebrated on the first day of the first month according to Chinese calendar and is also known as Lunar New Year. The day is rooted in centuries old customs and traditions and is one of the most popular public holidays in China. Apart from China, the day is also celebrated in other countries such as Korea, Bhutan, Vietnam, Singapore, Malaysia, Hong Kong, etc., which follows the Chinese calendar, so the date of Chinese New Year changes every year.
Chinese New Year is celebrated in different ways in different parts of the world. The predominant color in all the celebrations of this day is red. According to tradition, red envelopes containing money are given by the elderly to the young. The money contained in these red envelopes is always even, which is determined by the left-most digit than the right-most one. The red envelopes are symbolic of staving off evil and bringing in good luck.
Chinese New Year is celebrated in different ways in different parts of the world. The predominant color in all the celebrations of this day is red. According to tradition, red envelopes containing money are given by the elderly to the young. The money contained in these red envelopes is always even, which is determined by the left-most digit than the right-most one. The red envelopes are symbolic of staving off evil and bringing in good luck.
In this day, people enjoy eating lots of delicious food such as Chinese pastry, Steamed Cup Cake and Fried Chinese Noodle. People will normally visit relatives and friends, do some shopping, watch traditional Chinese shows, launch fireworks, and plan for the coming year. After that, people will normally completely clean the house and display traditional New Year decorations such as red lanterns, red couplets, New Year paintings, and red lanterns. This festivity is the time for family reunion, which is the most important part of the Chinese New Year celebration.
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