The lovely family
This photograph was taken in living room and show the family consists of the mother, the father and a little girl.Beginning with the man on the left hand side, who is wearing a white shirt, he is a tall man with small eyes. He look a lot of younger but he is a father. His face was seamed with care about the little girl. Moreover, He is very kind and really love the little girl because when a holiday, he always used the time with his family.
Next, the little girl who is wearing a white shirt, she is a daughter. She is a 6 year-old girl who has short black hair, oval face and big brown eyes. She is so cute and friendly. She looking at the notebook. I think she very happy.
The last person next to the little girl, who is wearing a gray shirt with a white jeans. She looks like a sister but she is a mother. she is a beautiful girl who has oval face, big black eyes and long straight blonde hair. She is logical and good looking. She always take care for the daughter and she love her so much.
Finally, in the picture show this the family is a warm and loving family because they always have a wonderful time to do activity together.
Wow! it is a lovely family and story. The whole story is good. I will give you 9/10.
ตอบลบThe story is good. I will give you 9 point.
ตอบลบIt is a very good story.I like the content you describe. I will give you 9.
ตอบลบYour story is good, but you should check your grammar because in some sentences, such as, in paragraph 3 line 3, "I think she very happy.", it should be "I think she is very happy." and when the subject is a singular noun you should put "s" behind the verb. I'll give you 8/10
ตอบลบThis family is a lovely family. I think your story is not bad, but you should check your grammar in paragraph 3 line 3 again. I'll give you 8.5 / 10
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