My friends in the university
The first left, She is my first friend at the university. Her name is Phattaraporn Tiathong. She is now 21 years old. She has long straight hair with big black eyes then she is very cute because she has fair skin. She is friendly and talkative. When she have a time, she often talked everyone to buy her cream. Furthermore, she is very funny because she has many stories to tell me, her story was very amusing to me. She is a good friend because when I have a problem, she always gave the best advice also she help friends when they need it. Everyone knows she is generous.
Next, the person standing left me. She is a good friends. She is a young man of 21 years. She had short black hair with round face. Her name is Panita Ninsuwan or everyone called her "Grandma" because she old-fashioned and her manners as an old man. In the class I always sit next to her and she like to talk her jokes also we like to play the game together. She is intelligent, kind and helpful. She often buys a snack for friends. Moreover, she has lifestyle like me. I think she is a nice-looking woman.
The last person standing right me. Her name is Patsaya Petyuan or friends calls her "Sai". Sai is a good friend of mine. She is a young man in her late twenties. She has short brown hair with big brown eyes. She is sociable and outgoing. for example, she likes to go to the parties. She likes to talk with people and make friends easily. All friends like her because she is friendly.
Finally, Not only 3 friends that a good friend of mine, but I still many a good friend that I talk about them yet.

Your friends are so cute. I think it's a really good story.so I give you 10 points
ตอบลบYour contents are not bad. Something are little wrong or may use other words better than this. I will give 8.3/10
ตอบลบYour friends are cute. The story is ok. I will give you 8.5 point.
ตอบลบFor me, this story is good, but some sentences you should rectify the grammar, such as, in paragraph 1 line 4 "When she have a time", it should be "When she has a time", or in paragraph 2 line 3-4 "because she old-fashioned", it should be "because she is old-fashioned". I'll give you 8/10.
ตอบลบAll your friends are lovely. You can describe the nature of your friend is not bad. But you should not forget the introduction in the story, so I give you 8.5 points.
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